about 1.30am last night, i received my email reply from Sister Lucille! she actually checked my speech and even corrected it for me! i'm so happy. she said i had the tendency of reapeating my words and what i'm trying to say. i have to agree with that. so she sorrected what was needed and she sent it back to me! i was so happy that my prayers were answered! i'll be using the version she corrected. no major changes!